2013년 6월 3일 월요일

Toefl Essay #2: Globalization makes a difference




New changes in the 21st century brought by the globalization 






                Psy's Gangnam style has gone over 1.6 billion views. Arab Spring has democratized Egypt and Tunisia. Now, the 21st century has begun. Globalization of the 21st century goes beyond the integration of culture and political systems. With the development of technology, information travels within a split second from the opposite part of the world.  Essentially, the world has become an integrated “town” marked by efficient communication and shared values. Among numerous changes that characterize 21st century, I believe the international cooperation for human rights and integration of world economy will become the two most important outcomes of globalization.
               In the 21st century, activism for human rights will see exponential growth with global legal coordination. In the past, it was hard to induce global cooperation for human rights because many countries prioritized national sovereignty and domestic laws over other international treaties. However, rapid growth of non-governmental organization (NGOs) and international law in the 21st successfully prompted many countries’ coordinated actions against “crimes against humanity,” the universal harm to peace. The International Criminal Court (ICC)’s recent conviction of Pinochet, a former dictator in Chile demonstrates this point. A Spanish judge in ICC requested the arrest of Pinochet for genocide and terrorism in Chile and Argentina. ICC successfully earned British government’s cooperation to deport him for trial. As such, ICC punishes past war criminals, compensates for victims, and research further to prevent similar human rights disasters in the future. This example illustrates that growing practical power of international law is crucial to deliver justice to human rights violations in North Korea and other African autocratic governments in the new 21st century.
In the 21st century, a new economic order will establish with the rising influence of China and international organizations. When the Bretton Woods System was established in 20th century, international organizations like World Trade Organization (WTO) and International Monetary Fund (IMF) were dominated by “Western powers,” such as United States and Britain because they are the biggest shareholders and have veto powers to shape their policy decisions. However, the rapid growth of China’s Multi-National Companies(MNCs) and Foreign Direct Investment(FDIs) in 21st century led many scholars to believe that the new century will mark a transition in economic balance of power. MNCs not only initiate economic transactions, but also shape worldwide economic norms and trends by accelerating spread of information and values between countries. Currently, the US is the biggest shareholder influencing and vetoing the decisions of WTO and IMF.  However, the 21st century will mark an important power transition in worldwide economy from US- centered dynamics to China-centered dynamics, leading world economy to become not only more integrated but also more “flat.”

The world has changed increment by increment in each decade and every century However, the 21st century has seen particularly rapid changes, establishing new dynamics of international cooperation over universal human rights and new balances of economic power. Various problems of 21st century, such as environmental issues, terrorism, human rights, and nuclear weapons, all require effective worldwide cooperation. How flexibly each country can react and adapt to the changes of 21st century will determine the efficiency of the worldwide cooperation and will shape the future of human society.   





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  1. First comment!
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  2. Whoa, this essay gave me a very strong first impression, considering that you used a lot of interesting examples that I have never heard of. I think your essay differentiates from others' mainly because of the way you elborated your arguments. Although globalization itself may not be a refreshing topic, the supporting assertions you provided were, and that's why I had fun time reading this!

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  3. I agree to what the previous 'commentor' Rhee said. There were many interesting examples that supports your stance. To be quit honest I didn't know the existence of the ICC before right now! :) When I first looked at your essay's topic about the globalization I thought that you would say some typical things such as the development of the communication system, etc... But the elaboration you took was a very unique one ; talking about the human rights and the economy.
    Overall it was a unique piece of writing and I had great time reading it

    Have a good day :)

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